You each have had experiences that changed the way you view the world. In this essay, I want you to tell me about one event that occurred within a twenty-four hour period that changed your life. I want to experience this event as you experienced it, so walk me through it step-by-step. A successful essay will use a combination of the techniques described in Chapter 2 of The St. Martin's Guide to Writing, such as representations of conversations, active verbs to move the essay along, strong, specific details, and strong story-telling to create a world in which the reader feels what you intend the reader to feel. I also expect to see your world-view changed in some way by the end of the essay.
This essay must be at least three pages long, be set in double-spaced, 12-point Times New Roman font with one-inch margins, and your name, my name, and your course must appear in the top left-hand margin on the first page only. All subsequent pages must be noted with your last name and all pages must be numbered.
i did brain storm and that what you going to use
1-what I did after graduation
2-going to usa or stay in usa
3- what major is the best
4- no one help me choosing my major because I'm the oldest brother.
5- I decide to came to us
6- I Need money
7- I should get loan from my bank
8- finally I booked a flight to us
9- in the 9th of May 2014
10- I'm in Oklahoma to study English
11- I tried to eat halal meat only
12- after 8 months I got scholarship
13 - I like USA more than my country
14- my family wants me.
15- I can't live alone I need a roommate.
16- I tried to cook
17- I'm finally 21 years
18- wait I can't drink because I'm Muslim
19- every one knows me here thought that I'm Indian.
20- I just want to take a test from school
21- my dad refuses
22- as always
23- it's time to focus on my future
24- the 24th of August 2016 at 9 am was my first class
25- software engineering
26- Missouri , Kansas city
27- Avila university
28- I moved from North Carolina to here
29 - I was in NC to study also English
30- I got 6 out of 9 in English test
31- my father starred to feel proud of me
32- my mom wants me to be near to her and wants me to go back but I told her that i have to stay here to be an engineer.
33- I love math but I hate graphing
34- my first English class was with Alison coupland in fall 2016
35- my second class is with her also in summer 2017
36-Ramadan is a rough month for me.
37- this is my first time that I fast out of my country
38- again it's so hard
39- I got a puppy
40- she was 27 days' old
41 - her name is Aria
42- it's my first time that I raise a dog and I love it.
43- I hate computers
44- I bought my first car
45- I bought my first motorcycle
46- I want my mom and dad to came here and see me how I'm trying my best to keep them proud.
47- I cry every time I feel bad because it's give me relive.
48- I want to try wine just to feel relax
49- I travel a lot in usa
50- half way to graduate
51- I got 3 F' s and 3 A's Last semester
52- number 51 to show you how my I'm sooo unlucky
53- I have 5 brother and 2 sisters
54- I'm the oldest that's why my mom wants me back.
55- I quit smoking in 2015
56- my father is a smoker
57- Las Vegas is my dream city that I want to visit
58- I used to have blackberry
59- don't believe everything you read
60- 100 detail is a lot
61- I met my wife in Oklahoma
62 - my supervisor was Ron Meclery
63- he did my first assignment for me
64- I worked with Walmart for 6 months
65- my first semester was the best semester for me.
66- every day I ask myself m I going to graduate?
67- most likely I'm going to
68- my first friend that I met here is my bff right now
69- in fall 2016 I saw snow for first time
70- while I'm doing the 100 details I remember my first semester in Avila.
71- I'm really sorry mom
72- I call my family ones a week
73- I used to call them every day.
74- mosa is my roommate
75- I thought he is gay person
76- I did not know what gay means.
77- when I came to us I did not know how to read and right my name
78- after 3 months only I learn a lot .
79- I start to watch movies (thank you Netflix)
80- I spent over 125000$ so far
81- are you really going to read all of that?
82- it's a hard life in here but it's made me strong man.
83- I'm going back to my country for a small vacation.
84- I start to eat meet
85- my brother graduate from high school
86- I love reading in English not in Arabic.
87- I love hacking computers but my major wants me to be a costumer service person.
88- some day I'll hack Google.
89- I feed my dog every day 3 times
90- I wanted to be a safety engineer but I did not got chance.
91- my apartment got stolen in 23rd of Nov 2016
92- unfortunately my birthday is in 16th of Nov
93- the weather in here is very hot in summer and very cold in winter.
94- my favorite book is holes
95- I just want to finish school and go back to my country just to back to my old routine.
96- one fact about me that I haven't been sick since I came to usa.
97- I hate American music.
98- I love Arabic music.
99- I'm taking 9 credit this semester just to prove to my father that I can do it.
100- I'm taking 2 classes of math and English
101- I hair this number in a lot of songs and I don't know what it's mean.