Write essay on Al-Hazem Storm

1. In first paragraph I wrote the event, but I need an introduction paragraph then the next paragraph the event paragrah. ( make two separet paragraph)

2. I need a conclusion from my essay. ( it should be conceted with previous paragraph)

3. I need a theise stamtmet in each paragraph.

4 I need to change the topic sentence or make it more clear of first cause of the essay. ( that on paragraph 2)

5. check the transition word. ( make it better)

6. chech the realted of inforamtion and make good connection between each paragraph.

7. check if i have any mistake.

My organsim of my essay should be like that

1. ( introduction)

2. ( event)

3. (Causes)

4. (Conclusion.)