Write a 250-300 cause or effect paragraph.

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The day I decided to move alone and be independent of my parents, was one of the hardest days of my life. Living in my parents' house was a wonderful experience, but as adulthood comes to the life of a teenager, making big decisions comes hand in hand. When I was 19 years old, without money, without a job and still being a college student, I decided to take the decision of my life and leave the homes of my parents. At first glance it may sound like an easy decision, but it is not at all. The first step I had to do was a balance between finding a job, thatcould let me continue attending school, but, at the same time it gives me sufficient resources to be able to pay a shared apartment with my college colleagues. The greatest support I received was from my own parents, and it was my mother who helped me get a part-time job in the chain of supermarkets that she worked. The second stage was to find a shared apartment near campus. I searched for about ten days, until some of my physics classmates told me that one of his roommates would graduate from the university that month and that they were looking for who to rent that room. Thanks to the support I had from my parents and my colleagues in the college, I was able to fulfill one of the great goals of all teenager, such as being independent!