Revise

Most important thing is to revise the language and grammatical errors. I've found a few errors, also, there are some sentences that I'm confused and couldn't get the meaning please read it and edit again. I want it to be great please don't leave anything abmigious.

Please write another SOURCE paragraph using this source: (I know it is too long but you can focus on the last 2 pages)

http://harpers.org/archive/2007/02/the-ecstasy-of-influence/

Please write the Argument in one or two sentences.

Please write the problem in one or two sentences.

Answer the question below for me to answer to the professor when he asks;

What do you want to tell people in this essay?

You can also use this video if you want, To help you get info about SHIELDS

http://www.cc.com/video-clips/ohefue/the-colbert-report-david-shields