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When you think about sports, does soccer comes into your mind? In America soccer is a known sports to most people out it isn't as big as other sports such as NFL and Baseball. While it is actually one of the most famous sport in the world today. It is played all over the world and many people play it either for fun or competitive. There are many soccer discourse communities all around in the America. Like other local soccer team is just play for fun or competitive, but my team is very organized and well developed than other teams since team members are passionate in a soccer.
My local soccer team has various characteristics. First thing is diversity. My team consists of people who came from many other countries. Most of them came from South America, Asia and Africa. For this reason, every team member has an own characteristic of their country that make team special. For ex, people who came from South America, they are usually good at touching the ball that can make a good chance to passing or shooting a ball. Other people who came from Asia, they have good passion of soccer that make the other team to get tired. Second, characteristic is kindness. Sometimes, new faces has joined our club with very poor soccer skills or knowledge. Playing with this kind of person can render boredom. Because, poor skill and knowledge would distract the flow of the soccer games and cause some people who is very aggressive to get mad at beginner. However, team members are so nice that, they are willing to teach them with nicely manner. They would willing to describe how to control the ball, soccer rules and basic strategies.