Greene and Lidinsky present three helpful models for formulating a working thesis:


The Misinterpretations model: "Although many have argued X, a careful examination suggests Z." 

The Gap model: "Although others have noted X, they have overlooked the importance of Y." 

The Modification model: "Although I agree with the X and Y ideas of other writers, it is important to extend/refine/limit their ideas in this way..." 


Choose two of the above thesis models and craft two working thesis statements that can be use you could us in James Loewn " essay lies my teacher told me"