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A sari is a female traditional piece of clothing that is wrapped around the waist with one end and draped over the shoulder while a churidar consists of three pieces: a long top, fitted pants and a shawl. In South Asian countries women wear saris more frequently and while in western countries, these are clothing that are only worn on special occasions such as during festivals, religious ceremonies and parties. Traditional attires that are worn by South Asian women are now becoming altered to similar styles of that in the modern world. Traditional attires are essentially meant to wear, while remaining covered up and focusing on the design of the clothing.

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