1.1dentify all of the problems / errors with this letter.

2. Create a professional letter for the sales position at Apple.

678 Main Street road Kennt. oh 44444

Dec. 12, 2016

John Jay miller

Apple, Inc.

757 Heights avve., Fairlawn, Oh 22244

Dear John,

Iain writing to you to ask you for a job. My mom thinks you would be stupid to not hire me. Even though the last guy I worked for called me lazy, there is quite a few reasons you should consider me for this pistion. I have to yrs of vast expereince pikking up leaves.

I have attend Youngstown college since 2004 and have a masters in business writing. I was on the probationary list only 6times and have an C average grades. I am also part of our local punk band. We help out with getting many of the students here at the college some real fun times.

My source tells me that you are looking for a salesman. While I have no sales experience per say. I am willing to take this low level boring job to and would like to start my dreaded 9to5work at your company. This job would help me pay for some of my bills so I am asking for $20.00an hour to start. My dreams is to work with high end products so I can look cool. Your postion would be great for that.

I am currently doing community service at my local sanitation plant while I finish up my clases. If I continue to behave well, this service will end. I need to have a jobe set up, I am really good talking with people (its getting me to be quited that's hard). My dad says your customers will really have a great time with me and I agree. I am quite the go-gettter.

I await your quick job offer. Please call anytime. If I do not answer, please leave a message . I will get back to you at my earliest convenience.

Thank you,

Ralph "the Mouth" Jungle Smith