Your paper does a good job in presenting the components of healing and care of the 3 faiths, although Shintoism could be developed more. This gave great opportunity to discuss specific comparisons and contrasts of these components with those of Christianity. The paper (final draft) can be greatly benefitted by weaving in more specific comparisons and contrasts within each faith section. as you go along.
Faith Diversity Assignment requirements, per syllabus and assignment assist:
* Research three diverse faiths. Yes.
* Compare the philosophy of providing care from the perspective of each of these three faiths with that of the Christian perspective and your own personal perspective. Yes.
* summarize your findings and compare and contrast the different belief systems (with respect to the healing process), reinforcing major themes with insights gained from your research... Compare [and contrast] these beliefs to the Christian philosophy of faith and healing. Yes.
* In your paper, Do Research and Address questions 1-2 listed in your assignment: Yes.
(1) What is their spiritual perspective on healing?
(2) What are the critical components of healing, such as prayer, meditation, belief, family, etc?