I am writting a letter about my condition, and i have to describe how it affected me, and everyday life. Can someone correct my grammar, punctation, and make it flw better?

To whom it may concern,

My name is -------, and I am writing on my own behave to discuss how my condition affected my life. In September of 2013, I started to lose my hair and I various places my hair started to thin, and brittle, which caused me to go bald. Also, I noticed that my nails became brittle and worn looking. In addition to having my hair and nail go brittle, my energy level started deplete where I felt tired, and weak. As my symptom progressed, I started to have high levels of depression, where I felt blue all the time. I didn’t know why I felt and looked the way I did, so went to the doctor. The doctor took blood panels to determine what was wrong with me. When the test came back, I was told I had hypothyroidism condition. After getting my results back, I was prescribed two medications for my conditions. I was prescribed and hair topic, to promote hair growth and a thyroid medication to get my thyroid to start working properly again. I was told that I would have to take the topical for a couple of months and the thyroid medication will be a long term medication that I will have to take the rest of my life. Even though I got a diagnose and medication, I still had to face the public with my hair missing, bald spots, worn brittle looking figure nail, and having an elevated depression level for several months. I took about three to four months before I grew some of my hair back. Having to face the public, I felt self-conscious, and anxiety, because my hair was missing, and it was embarrassing. Each day, I had to go in public was another day of embarrassment, and another day of feeling unease, frustration, nervous that people are looking at me, and worry that my hair might not grow back. It’s been some months and my hair still haven’t grown back fully, and have lots og breakage every wear. My depression level has gone down, and I still feel self-conscious, and I still worry that my hair won’t grow back fully.