can someone correct my grammar, and punctuation?

I agree with Connie, The Catalinas hold their own deep-colored magic,because when I was in the military is was station at white sands New Mexico, which east of Arizona, and six to eight hours away. While in the military I was in a program to help single soldiers have the opportunity to travel. The group of soldiers which were given the opportunity to travel along with myself was destined to go to Las Vegas to have a good time. On our destination to Las Vegas, we had to travel through Arizona, Where I go a change to be memorized by the grandeur of the Arizona Mountains, and canyons. Looking outside my van window, I got to see the prettiest mountain sites ever. The Mountain View I saw was prettiest red colored mounds, with green grassy moss on it, and a beautiful dark, light blue, and white sky on it that looked like a perfect portrait picture. Travel for hours, it started to become sunset, which the sunset made the clouds turn red with the sun peaking through, the mountains and the sunset appear to become one, and gave me an in sight of a my own deep-colored magic before me eye.