You will read and respond to Bethany Thornton's narrative "Boundaries"

In your response, please explain Which paragraph do you feel had the most detailed description? Why? Are there any areas in the essay where you feel detail was lacking? Do you feel there any parts of the narrative that are out of chronological order?

Explain and comment on whether the order is effective. What are your feelings when you read the paragraph that begins, "I sensed the uneasiness of people around me"? Were you surprised? Could you relate? Why do you think the author is sharing this narrative? Comment on the purpose, but also relate the purpose to who you think is the intended audience. What was your favorite part of the narrative? Why?