Write a substantive negative message using the indirect approach that includes the 4 components illustrated. You can use a scenario from your imaginary businesses if you'd like. Remember to break up large paragraphs to improve "digestibility."
(IMAGINARY BUSINESS: IS A SENIOR VILLAGE WITH EVERYTHING ON THE GROUNDS; ITS A CITY IN ONE PLACE FOR SENIORS, THEY NEVER HAVE TO LEAVE THE GROUNDS).
This assessment is worth 30 points. I will llooking at
Analysis, clarity of writing (7 points)
Use of negative writing techniques (18 points)
Spelling, grammar and typos (5 points)