Thesis Statement Peer Review

Please share the thesis you created for your Personal Essay (in the thesis builder), and then respond to the following questions:

a) Discuss why placing your thesis statement as the final sentence of your introduction is important.

b) Discuss how your thesis will guide the body paragraphs of your essay.

After you have posted your thesis, click REPLY on a classmate's post, and respond to his/her thesis by addressing the following questions:

a) Discuss your observations regarding how well your classmate's thesis presents three ideas to guide his/her essay.

b) Offer ideas for improvement where needed, and celebrate one or more strengths in your classmate's writing.

How to give feedback: A "good" peer review is specific and combines suggestions for improvement and praise for what works well. A "poor" peer review does not give specifics and does not offer insight to help your classmate reflect on or improve his or her writing.