The School of Hospitality Business Application for Junior Admission

Please address why you are passionate about hospitality business industry, what are your goals, hopes, and dreams, and how will a hospitality degree help you to achieve them. Discuss any other issues that the Admissions Committee should consider about your application (statement should not exceed 500 words).

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I had passionate in the hotel industry since my childhood. I traveled a lot of different places when I was a child. These trips not only expanded my knowledge but also build up my interest in hotels. Every time when I stay at a hotel, I am curious about its brand, history, and everything.I learned a lot of things such as different types of hotels, brands and chains of hotels, and different levels of hotels. I kept my interest in the hotel until my junior year in high school. I learned that there is a major of hospitality business at Michigan State University. Thus, I turned my interesting in hotels to a goal of my career. After I, fortunately, admitted by the Michigan State University, I found my first internship at Crown Plaza Shanghai. I wanted to try out in this industry to see if I really like it. I worked as a belt man for two months. Although belt man is a tough and hard job. I stilled enjoyed work at a hotel. Just like professor Heberlein said in 237 class, "in this industry, you either love it or hate it, and I must be the person who loves it. So far, I set my goal as a hotel operator. I hope I can become a revenue manager in few years after I graduate from Michigan state University. In the further future, after I have enough of experiences and contacts, I want to become a hotel consultant, Because in that way I can deliver my ideas and philosophy of hospitality to more hotels.