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Most big cats live in places like jungles with many trees. The snow leopard is an interesting big cat that lives in the mountains somewhere in Asia. It’s very cold there. They are stocky with thick fur and long tails. It is elusive and endangered. They hunt wild game but local herders often kill snow leopards to ensure the safety of their flocks. Many efforts are made to conserve this species.