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Based on Dr. Shelley Moriston essay today's reading, the authors did many great things but most of all are served the army, completing his second doctoral degree in nursing education, and he was under contract with McGraw-Hill. First, Moriston served the army after he graduated from high school. The reason why Morison didn't want to stay was there was not good work for him; he wanted a career for his life. Most of his friends work at the mall or Hardee's and that was not his dream since he from Iowa.

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