Read the two paragraph given below write a brief paragraph 150 words in which you do following.

Recognize which paragraph was more effective and examine why this is so
Write a disscussion of sentence variety and rhythm of author writing focus on writing opinions given
underline your topic sentence

1. A lot of people do not have will. Everyone requires a will, but not all people have one. Wills are significant because they describe who gets your stuff after you die. You do not want things going to someone you do not want them to go to. My Aunt Martha went lawyer to get will, I did mine on line. My dad died in 1988. He did not have will. His stuff went to my stepmother, who I do not get along with. If he would have had will, I might have been able to start college sooner. But my dad did not have will. a will is good to have and you require to get one. Do you have a will?

2. Most consumers understand that good credit score is important to one's finanical security and stability. Several people may understand how credit score is computed. Payment history account for roughly 35% of one's overall score. This means that one-time payments are absolutlly essentail.b Debt level is is not far behind at 30%. This accounts for near limits and total amount of money owe. Length of credit history come next at 15%. Followed by inquiries at 10% and mixed credit at 10%.