Primary Discussion Response

Topic is: Characteristics of a Good Parent

• Introduction paragraph: Your introduction is the first paragraph in your essay. It should grab the reader's attention, provide an overview of the topic, and end with your thesis statement.

• Thesis statement: Your thesis statement should clearly make a claim and describes the central argument or idea of your essay.

• One thing that would help is to clearly layout your three most important characteristics and to clearly identify them as the most important characteristics of a successfulparent. This is an argumentive essay. I only need the first paragraph with thesis statement.