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Buber was responding to the view of Christians. I think his criticism is valid. Nowadays people are going to church for the people or special occasions. People aren't going to church with the mindset that they are there to get closer to God. They are there because they think they have to be. Only one day of the week people get dressed up to go to church and feel like that's enough. There are six other days of the week that you could be spending trying to get to know God more. Being in church doesn't automatically give you that close relationship. If you are truly religious, then just going to church for show or the excitement, isn't enough. You have to try to put in more effort. They are so busy focusing on the wrong things and not putting in more time for God. Rather they are putting on a show for man.