From these paragraphs can you write, introduction and conclusion.
can also correct every things in them, i need it to be analytical
Partners john,sharon and i have chosen a solid magazines and all of them are useful in academic context and every day life. while the purpose of item for all of us is to educate and that is good to develop our skills in education subject for our university way. audience are differ, for john and sharon public audience in contrast for my subject audience are the university's alumni,faculty,staff and friends.
We have different publisher. John publisher's Deniel Rex while sharon publisher's keith Grossman however mine is UPD university and that will help us how to find publisher from different magazine. John published in Dec 2011 and mine 4 months earlier in contrast with sharon was published in this new year 2012and that help us to practice how to do different APA bibliography. The content aids of my partner are bold and color picture while my contain aids are index and color picture. The length of the john's article is same as sharon which is one page, whereas mine is a little bit longer since they comes from different type of interest.
Every member has interest that differs from another; john and sharon interest is personal interest moreover mine is in new technology.Consequantly, the following is a list of our references----, -----, -----.
Finally, the type of vocabulary is different among our articles, involves academic and every day vocabulary, these words are medium difficult. the average # of words per sentence for us 20 to 27 words. our average # of sentence per paragraph range 8 to 9 sentences.