Our initial review indicates your submission is missing some key information or further revision of your work is needed. Below, and also within the body of your work, you will find our suggestions for revisions required in order for you to successfully complete this assignment:
Although it seems all of the necessary components of the ‘bag' are included, formatting seems to be a concern here.
How you write parent letters is just as important as writing them. Many sentences within this letter seem to put parents down and explain expectations to them.
Some parents may be offended by this. Also, for each and every item within the ‘bag,' a complete explanation should be included. It may be best to discuss each item in complete sentence/essay form.
o Image of ideal Healthy Take Home Bag is provided. Selected bag is appropriate, and bag and chosen theme are explained in a fully developed paragraph.
o One or more games are provided. Games are age- and developmentally appropriate, and are explained in a fully developed paragraph.
o Two or more children's books are provided. Books are age- and developmentally appropriate, and are explained in two fully developed paragraphs.
o One or more sets of manipulatives are provided. Manipulatives are age- and developmentally appropriate, and are explained in a fully developed paragraph.
o One or more dramatic play sets are provided. Dramatic play activities are age- and developmentally appropriate, and are explained in a fully developed paragraph.
o One or more sensory play experiences are provided. Sensory play activities are age- and developmentally appropriate, and are explained in a fully developed paragraph.
o One or more science experiments are provided. Science experiments are age- and developmentally appropriate, and are explained in a fully developed paragraph.
o One or more recipes for healthy snacks are provided. Recipes are age- and developmentally appropriate, and are explained in a fully developed paragraph.
o One or more additional resources are provided. Resources are appropriate and easily accessible to families, and are explained in a fully developed paragraph.
o APA references page, title page, in-text citations, spelling, grammar, punctuation, and format are appropriate.
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Our notes and suggestions for revision are not all-inclusive; this means that beyond the recommendations for revision we've made on this exam, there may be other improvements you must make to your assignment. It remains your responsibility to make all necessary corrections and to ensure your next submission satisfies all requirements of the assignment.
Use this opportunity to review any spelling, punctuation, grammar, or formatting errors. If you have used any outside sources in your work, ensure you have properly cited all sources using APA format in your in-text citations and a References page if needed.