Instructions 

This journal assignment allows you to reflect on the feedback you received in Writers' Workshop 1. The purpose is for you to identify what feedback was helpful and what feedback was not, based on what you received from your peers and your instructor, and to explain why. The journal also gives you an opportunity to articulate how you will use the feedback to expand and deepen the story you decide to develop this term.

Reflect on feedback you have received from your peers and instructor, earlier resources offered in the modules, and your own self-analysis of your writing pieces. What has or has not been helpful in developing your stories? Determine from your two story pitches which one you would like to develop further as your final piece of nonfiction.
Describe how you will incorporate feedback or how you will revise less effective passages in order to develop this piece for final submission. Analyze what nonfiction-specific techniques you had the most difficulty adapting to your writing and how you can improve in that area. What was the most helpful part of the peer review process, and what was the most frustrating part? What did you find personally useful about providing actionable recommendations concerning the effectiveness of structure in the work of your peers?

For additional details, please refer to the Final Project II Milestone One Guidelines and Rubric document in the Assignment Guidelines and Rubrics section of the course.

Attachment:- critique_pitch.rar