I need help into transitioning into my blueprint for my paper I was wondering if someone could help me give me some ideas and pointers, edit if you see a problem. Thank you so much this is what I have so far:

As my eyes scanned the page and my mind comprehended the words I was transformed to the worlds of two tantalizing novels that depicted the scenes of sadistic imperialistic activities throughout the continent of Africa. Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad and Chinua Achebe’s Things Fall Apart, mix truth and fiction to show the cataclysmic changes of life, history and the compulsions of the soul. Both novels have much in common but are quite different from one another. One’s purpose is to show the strength of African cultures and traditions while the other condemns colonialism. Achebe’s response novel to Heart of Darkness sends a message that counteracts Conrad’s…