I have attached the topic I started-my instructor said I had no point can someone help me form a thesis from what I have-s..details of what it should be are listed below. Thanks!

Directions

Submit a one page academic outline.

Include an introduction and thesis statement.

Include one paragraph from your Journal (need not be perfect - can include questions about concepts)

Add at least 2-3 references to support your introduction and thesis statement.

Do you want assistance with your writing mechanics or with If so, visit the CSU-Global Library for resources. Be sure to back up your claims, assumptions, and facts with credible web sources and scholarly articles based on research in the library databases. Remember that critical thinking is not your opinion-rather, it is a claim, assumption, or fact that provides evidence to s

Requirements

In this Portfolio Project topic outline assignment, you need to back up your facts, assumptions, and claims with scholarly sources. Keep in mind that critical reasoning and thinking skills are not the same as opinions. While it is acceptable and occasionally appropriate to write in the first person, for this assignment be sure to read how to avoid personal pronouns and support your ideas with valid, reputable, and scholarly articles.

Include at least 1-2 scholarly sources that are not required or recommended readings for this course. The CSU-Global Library is a good place to find these sources.