Give a feedback to both of the writers. (75-125 word per writer)

1. Is the Thesis arguable?

2. Is it clear?

3. DOES IT ANSWER ALL THE QUESTIONS?

Task
Adichie's Americanah highlights the complications of race and nationality that accompany questions of gender. The story calls attention to different privileges and struggles that women, women of color, and women who are immigrants face in the US. Why is it important to acknowledge and understand the differences in experiences between these women?

4. What in the thesis needs to be focused, or more specific? Often theses are often too broad or vague in the beginning stages.