For each number, please answer each question-where applicable-in full sentences. There should be no "yes" or "no" entries. You can simply type your responses below each numbered entry. Include this review with your final Project

1. Does the Introduction section describe the main scope of the research, and does it briefly reveal the results? Is the thesis clearly stated? What is it?

2. Does the Findings section include necessary statistics, basic facts, or other qualifying data? Write one example.

3. Are the in-text citations included in the Findings section, and does every paragraph at least end with a citation even if no direct quotes are used? Note where citations are missing and correct it.

4. Does the Discussion section address sensible deductions based on the qualifying data? Does the writer suggest that more research is needed and why?

5. Are the main headings-Introduction, Findings, Discussion, References-centered?

6. If present, are the personal interviews in quotation marks for direct quotes? Is the interview cited at the end of the qualifying text according to correct APA format?

7. Has the writer adequately reported the facts in a credible and substantial manner; has he or she included in-text and References page citations in correct APA format?

8. Does the Annotated Bibliography have annotations indented in block format, and are the source citations in correct APA format?

9. Has the writer successfully written all sections in third person?

10. Has the writer avoided using pronouns that include the reader? [you, us, we, your]

11. Are the subheadings located flush with the left margin, and are they 2-4 words in title case and in bold face?

12. Did the writer remember to avoid clichés, jargon, metaphor and slang?

13. Note the use of trite or ambiguous terms such as "very," "many," "different," "important," "a lot," or any other words that are trite and overused and correct them.

14. Proof read for grammar and punctuation errors.