Editing sentences to improve style. Eliminate Jargon and repetition for all sentences,

1) The report that was completed by the finance department organizes essential information in a quite unsatisfactory manner.

2) Few of our customers who ar emost valued seek to obtain goods and services from another vendor, but we must remain our vigilant in the business environment to better ensure that these such customers continue in their loyal efforts with our establishment.

3) Per your inquiry, Carla Meier is quite possibly the best and finest member of our staff that we have every had the distinct pleasure to have known andworked with.