Can you help me about assigment of english?

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My assigment is:

After I finished reading the next two chapters " The Wounded" and "After the Fall", my favorite character is Joseph, Joseph is Anna's father. One of the reasons is his affection for the family is great and noble. He is a great father. When Anna was sick, he was always there to take care of her every second, every minute. That shows the father's love is immense and expresses a touching image when he takes good care of his children. Moreover, he is also a pious man who always tries to protect his family's happiness. In addition, he devoted all his love to the homeland that place he grew up in from the mother's womb. It shows the love of the son to the homeland is great.