Assignment: ROUGH DRAFT FEEDBACK
Casondra I am giving you 80% of the points for the rough draft. You have a start and have made an effort but will need to work on all of the suggestions below in the final case analysis.
I have the following suggestions:
• Hard to find needed parts. You have some of the parts using headers but others are missing. Make them bold and easy to read.
• Look at the objectives of case analysis in the text on page CA2. This is very important for the overall analysis.
• Look at the preparation for discussion and written analysis in the text.
• You will need to include a financial component including your analysis. This should includes graphs, charts, etc... The main thing is to show your analysis of financial to help in your strategy.
• Need to get sources outside of text to help develop analysis. This is especially helpful in the financial area with updated into. Don't be afraid to use financial websites to help you with your analysis.
• Need SWOT clearly defined. This should include several points in each category with explanation. Bullet points or table work well.
• Identify specific strategic challenges in the analysis. Remember these by definition are longer term in nature.
• Develop a specific strategic plan to fix the challenges. Must also include how you would implement.
• The analysis must be in APA format.
It is extremely short and does little more than summarize some information from the text. You have lots of comments and ideas on the side which could be the beginnings of some of the missing parts.
Case: Samsung's Environmental Responsibility: Striking the Right Note for Corporate Survival by Ms. Sushree Das.
You should think of yourself as an outside analyst looking at all parts of the company and presenting to the CEO.
Attachment:- lP_10_Samsung_Case_Study.rar