500+ Word Persuasive Business Message

Answer these questions regarding the Business Message.

My audience is:

My purpose is:

The main point I want to make in this text is:

Introduction

Does the letter give sufficient reasons, examples, arguments, testimonial to persuade the audience?

Does this letter utilize the direct or indirect pattern?

Is the pattern used effective?

Is it concise? Interesting?

Is the tone respectful?

Body

Does it stay focused on this objective or are there places it strays?

Is it organized logically?

Does the letter maintain a positive tone throughout?

Does the letter employ parallelism?

Are there transitions and are they effective?

Conclusion

Does the end of this document contain the necessary information: date, way of contact, etc?

Does the document end on a powerful persuasive note (i.e. postscript detailing an act now deal)?